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Broken

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Gentle rain pattering outside,
steaks of water
trickling down the pane of glass.
Listen.
The shrill squeak
as her hand slowly slid
down the window.
Wishing she could just
claw her way into the open.
To be free.
Released from the
sorrows of her heart.
Tears spilling, the droplets
splashing onto the cold tile floor.
Darkness in the sky-
showing its anger
a rumbling beast
flashes of blinding light
rain is like-
heaven bleeding.
And healing a torn wound,
a blurred silhouette.
Beautiful, shining, amidst the darkness.
Overwhelming pain.
And she began to cry in earnest.
Pouring out her misery.
A pitiful sound, still sorrowful,
but her heart flooded with compassion,
self-pity, as she still yearned
for time to reverse its flow.
Never to forget,
but to forgive
and to let go.
Love is so painful... but it's definitely worth the experience, isn't it?

Explanation: Rain was washing away all the pain-- allowing the girl with the broken heart to start over again. She was in much pain and misery, but she forgave and let go of her love in the end in order to be happy again. She sacrificed her love to be able to open her heart once more.

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annamarie7's avatar
I love this. I have been through the same thing. Your right it's painful, but it is worth the experience. He lost something, but I gained someone that makes me happy :) Good work!!